Commenting

LI: To learn how to write a smart comment.
So this week I commented on Xavier's blog he did great his blog post was about the Kauri tree I blog about it to and the tree was very interesting one day I hope I take great photos of it.

Commenting

LI : To learn how to write a smart comment.

This week for Commenting I commented on Vayan's writing task so in Vayan's task he had to read a book and then write down what was the story beginning to end. He has a very interesting point of view its a lot different to mine. 

Commenting

Here is his blog >>> Chris

LI: To learn how to write a great comment.

This week I did commenting I wrote a comment on Chris's blog he explained alot of stuff about world war one and how it started. My main question is How do you think world war two started? I know the answer of it just asking if he knew. 

Commenting

Fanini's blog>>>> Blog

LI: To learn how to write a smart comment.

This week I commented on Fanini's blog post his blog post was about the world war one trenches. What I liked about his work was that he put one fact in one box and also used questions that usually people would ask as titles but my question was that what if he was living in a trench what would he do. 

Film Festival Commenting

Click on this link to watch the movies >>> Film festival

LI: To write a comment about the film festival we contend at.

On Wednesday afternoon schools that are apart of the Manaiakalani gathered up to watch a school made movies by teachers. The event took place at sliver park in the movie theatre. There were about thirty movies made by schools and it was very interesting and funny.  So I commented on room twenty ones blogger from Point England school. I my self personal liked room twenty ones movie because its shows that people from that school are confident enough to dance in front of thirteen wholes schools. I think the event was great for the schools because the Manaiakalani school got to gather up and watch movies from other schools. I have and question for all the schools that came up with movies. How did you think of the movie Idea?.

Commenting

LI: To know how to write a good comment.

This week for commenting I wrote a comment on Xaviers blog asking him questions. 

Commenting

LI: To know how to right smart comments.
Today I did some commenting on a persons blog. I asked him What did you learn about the volume and capacity. I also like his explanation it was very detailed and helped me understand what he was doing for maths. 

Commenting

LI: To Learn How to do a smart comment.

Today I comment on Vayan's Blog post about duffy assembly. I heard in his blog post that a BMX Rider went to there school also a Rugby player. I also heard that they were talking about there achievements and what there goal is for the future. In my Comment I asked Vayan what other sport's matt play's.  

Commenting

Today I wrote a comment on Spelmans blog I wanted to ask him if he can tell me what the logo means and what the name means I also like his logo alot it was a amazing almost better then the logo I have in my group.

Little Boat Commenting

LI: To Identify the features of a recount.

LI: to evaluate in improve on our writing.

Today for Writing We had to blog my recount from last week of your comments. In my recount I was writing in first person if we are we had to comment on your recount and highlight the words you believe is first person and past tense and other stuff these are my comments I wrote about my recount. 

Commenting

LI: To know how to publish a smart comment.

Today I was commenting on Giovanni's blog I ask what did you learn from your this vs that work and I really Enjoyed seeing his blog it has a lot of interesting learning. My goal for commenting is to become  good at commenting by the end of term 1.

Giovanni's blog

commenting

LI: To know how to write a good comment

Today I was commenting on Fanini Blog I comment on his kiwi can blog post and asked him what did he learn at kiwi can but he did a amazing Job on his kiwi can blog post and I hope he keeps up the great work.

commenting

LI: to learn how to make a smart comment
Today I comment on peter blog and explain how I liked what he did and said"keep up the good work"

Blog commenting

LI: to know how to right a smart comment

commenting

commenting

LI: to know how to do a perfect comment

commenting

today i made a comment on Xavier blog post i told him I really like how he explain it

commenting

Today I commented on peters blog and said "speech marks is very good for your writing if it wasn't written in all of or story's wont make sense or end" I was right about that so always rember about speech marks.

commenting

LI: to try and make a perfect comment
today i comment on sakina blog on it i really liked how she explained a lot about kiwi can i hope she his more interesting blog post.

commenting

today i comment on Xavier blog i really liked how he used question marks and other marks and i really did learn something from xavier.